Katy Jurney Scrivo and Andrew Scrivo, teachers at Igiugig School |
I know this is a blog kept by our students and not our teachers, but if you'll be patient and keep reading, you'll get to the students' part of this entry.
When we returned from spring break, we learned that all of our salmon had died. Igiugig School has a lot of copper in the water, and even the tiniest amount of copper will kill salmon. Because our continually changing weather made the lake ice unstable (we normally get water for our fish tank from Iliamna Lake), we had been using water from the faucet and treating it with special chemicals to make it fish-safe. Unfortunately, it turned out not to be fish-safe. Even though we were planning to kill the fish at the end of the project (we can't release them into the wild), it was still a disappointment to come back and see they had all died.
During spring break, Andrew and I attended a teaching conference where we learned about writing using RAFTS--that is, Role, Audience, Format, Topic and Share. This morning, three students completed quickwrites using the following RAFT: Role-Igiugig School fish; Audience-Igiugig students; Format-a letter; Topic-"How could you just let us die?!?". For the S, we decided to post responses on our blog. They're very silly and entertaining and we hope you enjoy them!
Kaleb:
Dear Kids from the Igiugig School,
How could you let us die? We weren't even one yet and we only got to the stage of fries. I should have known that you guys were so young so you thought that we were actual french fries. We were terrified when you guys sucked us up into a bucket and when we were burying our dead all you did was scoop us up and throw us in the sink.
Sincerely,
Your Dead Fish
Dolly:
Dear Igi Students,
How could you kids just let us die?!? We were so young and you just left us to die! We were going to die anyway some other day, but we didn't want to now. Now you students have no pets. You guys lost your snake and now us. What kind of students are you? Well, yeah, so write back soon...as soon as you get this "How could you just let us die?!" letter, and if you don't, you will get another "How could you just let us die?!" letter! And you wouldn't want another "How could you just let us die?!" letter, would you? No, I'm sure not.
Sincerely,
Your Dead Fish
Blaise:
Hello people of Igiugig.
How could you just let us die in that small, little, dirty fish tank? You are evil. Remember me, Scoliosis Fish, with the messed up back? Well if you do, then run and hide. It does not matter; I will find you.
Sincerely,
Scoliosis Fish
Although I am sad about your fish.........this was my favorite blog yet! Great writing skills IGI students.
ReplyDeleteSorry about your fish, but your writing was the best thing to happen to my Wednesday.
ReplyDelete(Maybe you can have a very, very small fish fry? Would that make them fried fish fry?)
:) Susan Edwards
So sorry about you fish but what great writing. It was nice to see your teachers after all this time.
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